Re-making our OTS

As we have to re-film everything we as a group decided it was best to re-write our entire story as the previous "Pin-Up Girls" didnt feel like a noir film, Lewis had created a new storyboard for the new film as seen below:

 

 

Storyboard For Our OTS (Pin-up Girls)

This storyboard was drawn by Lewis Watson, he used the red for the blood as even though we know our OTS would be in black and white with no colour but we just wanted the red to be exaggerated, to show the brutality of the murder.